General discussion/Feedback

Please, feel free to discuss the story as a whole or give me feedback in this section. Every constructive single feedback is precious to me and will be taken into consideration.

I just caught up on Chapter 6, 7 and 8.
I loved Chapter 8 in particular!!
Although, I still don't understand, why they (Pendragon) would bring the family, especially the mothers, back with them. They are unnecessary ballast and pose a danger to Edgar and Aurore, cause they have to be protected. I would have left them somewhere else and went there alone.

Looking forward to Chapter 9 now.